Chapter Two is complete and online. I wonder, if you read the story and if you have the time, could you please give some feedback? Does the style work? Too long? Too short? Good, bad, funny, sad?? Here’s the start of chapter two with the link to the conclusion:
After a good nightâ€™s sleep under the stars, SB and Sir Engagealot enjoyed a simple breakfast of mouse on toast. â€œWell then, mumbled Engagealot as he flossed his teeth with the mouseâ€™s tail, â€œTell me about your time leading change at Beyondworld Tellings, and what it was that you felt you missed?â€
SB gathered her thoughts. â€œIn the early days, things went swimmingly. Important senior people attended meetings, made important senior noises, and said that important senior stuff would happen.â€ â€œI like itâ€ said Engagealot, â€œYou got a bunch of senior managers in BT (everyone referred to Beyondworld Tellings by its initials) to agree all that. Impressive.â€ He shuffled forward, keen to hear more.